New theme + Twilight rewritten

Yayyy new theme! What does everyone think? Obviously it’s super cheerful, which Ms. Lestrange would crucio us for, but she’s not here, is she? Sad smile 

 

SO. Twilight rewritten…I was thinking of just rewriting it, a page at a time. Technically this should be redirected to BelleFanfics, but I figured I’d just post a couple here to see what people think of the idea.

 

1. First Sight

My mom drove me to the airport with the windows rolled down. It was seventy-five degrees in Phoenix, the sky was a perfect shade of blue, dusted with puffy white clouds. I sighed, this might be the last time I ever enjoy the sun on my bare arms, I thought as I considered where I was going; a tiny town called Forks, where, apparently, it rains more than it shines. The only thing special about Forks is the constant threat of wetness. Ick. My mom left Forks with me when I was only a few months old, and made me go back to visit my dad, Charlie, ever summer until I was fourteen. That was when I’d finally had enough of the boring little town, and made Charlie come with me to California every summer.

But it was to this dreary town that I was now headed, much to my distaste.  I love Phoenix. I love the sun and the heat, I love the huge, bustling city and the constant movement.

“Bella,” my mom said, “You don’t have to do this…”

“But mom, I want to go!” I lied. I’ve always been a bad liar, but I’d repeated this lie so many times that it was starting to sound true. I still felt bad about leaving mom. I’ve always taken care of her, really. Of course, she has Phil, her new husband, to pay the bills and watch out for her, but still…

 

So what does everyone think so far?

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6 responses to “New theme + Twilight rewritten

  1. Its almost like you paraphrased it, sprinkled it with Teenage-girl writing, and somehow managed to make Bella even more dramatic.

    Good work, you’re on the way to Twilight Stardom.

    I also like the rhyming in that last line. I might make a rap out of that.

    And the new theme IS cheery. But it has sharks at the bottom, so I have no quarrel. Though if they had lasers on their heads…

  2. 😛
    Is Twilight Stardom good or bad? I’m trying to make it seem more like a joke, actually. I mean, form a sane person’s point of view, Twilight is just that, a joke. Some dramatic girl is torn between two supernatural species? Lol.

    And you rap? That’s cool!

    I was SO hoping someone would point out the sharks! Thank you!

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